Tassen Spellbinder

The only comment I have is that your fifth stanza needs punctuation to conclude it.

Thank you very much for the input!

Excellent! The formatting worked! I honestly already have a part 6 written, but I wanted to break things up a bit. Unfortunately, the only way to keep the length on ...

I see nothing you could improve, besides to possibly warn people at the top that they'll need tissue.

Excellent poem. My only critique would be that you should probably capitalize "saint jerome," unless the lowercase was an intentional slight, in which case, your poem takes a whole different ...

My only suggestion for this poem would be to make all the verses the same number of lines, instead of 4, 5, 5. That aside, I've got nothing to say. ...

I just have one suggestion for this poem: for the line "Blood and bodies till the end of your sight;" you may consider writing it as "Blood and bodies, no ...

Thanks input- the bit about distinguishing thoughts is greatly appreciated. As a side note, however, the main character is a he, not a she.

You simply must write more to this series. It would be a disservice to the world not to.

I can offer no suggestions, other than possibly make the last line part of the quatrain before it. That aside, this nearly brought tears to my eyes.

Thanks for the input! And I love your sig, by the way. Mythbusters, for the win!

No idea why this thing didn't indent properly, it did when I copy-pasted it on. Seems to have gotten messed up somewhere along the way. Apologies. I'll try and get ...

I second the motion for the Abhorsen Trilogy by Garth Nix, and recommend anything by R.A. Salvatore. He's an exceptionally good fantasy author.

Bartimaeus' humor is simply amazing. Sarcastic in an endearing way, like House, but not.

I disagree with the politics of it, but a very well written poem. My exhausted mind sees no errors.